I know you’re busy with bzillions of other letters, so I’ll just get right to it:
Please bring me a six-pack of stamina, a super-size box of imagination, and a package or two of really good verbs.
I could also use some ideas on how to solve that tricky flashback problem in Chapter 7, and maybe a fresh metaphor for the river imagery.
Do you have any kind of a cliche-blocker? Something that’s battery operated. Or wireless. Is there an app for this now?